Man I'm not gonna lie, this was fucking terrible.
Try actually screaming out the lyrics instead of just silently mouthing it. It'll be a lot more convincing.
I'm not even going to start with the kirby bullshit. The only thing you actually 'animated' was the lip syncing kirby on Mike Shinoda's part. so i'm giving you half a star for that.
overall this was extremely poor. better luck next time.